Deriz, Axel Van, GoldRush

[Axel Van Deriz]

two 200 x 300 here, or three 100 x 100... or whatever image of your choice, just don't stretch the boards please.

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FIRST NAME MIDDLE NAME LAST NAME

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WHEN THE LIGHTS GO OUT,

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name » Axel Van Deriz
nicknames » list them here
age » 23
date of birth » 8/27/1989
gender » male
sexual orientation » heterosexual
membergroup » rider
original or canon » original
occupation » No big job, works part time at a restaurant, though
events » Jumper

WE'LL BE SAFE AND SOUND,

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likes »

• women
  
• wine
  
• chess
  
• horses
  
• sweets
  

dislikes »

• spiders [eeeeeewww!]
  
• snakes [ich!]
  
• rude people
  
• fights
  
• fear itself
  

personality »

His personality is difficult to explain. Some people say he would be 'Bi-polar' but not always? Some people don't understand what this means. Normally he's very good natured, would never hurt a fly... unless the fly bit him. Aside from this, the few people that have seen him angry say only: I never want to see it again.

WE'LL TAKE CONTROL OF THE WORLD,

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appearance »
Height is a good 6'4"
He is slender, weighing in at only about 160 or so. giving him an almost 'feminine' figure.
eyes are a beautiful shade of sapphire blue
He is quite handsome as well, with a cute smile.
family » He's pretty much an orphan, with no siblings.
others of importance » none
pets » does your character have any pets?
A German Shepherd named Jerry Lee

LIKE IT'S ALL WE HAVE TO HOLD ON TO,

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medical history » only dust allergies
criminal history » Squeaky clean, no criminal record whatsoever
life history » Originally born in Germany, but raised almost all his life in the US. He came here in hopes of being a famous showjumper with his horse - GoldRush.

He got goldrush as a foal when he was 20, has hand raised him his whole life. While he is technically an orphan, he knew enough of his parents to know they never really wanted him, his adoptive parents, however, were supportive of his dream of being a famous showjumper.

AND WE'LL BE A DREAM,

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your name » Z or Axel, either is fine.
age » 23
roleplaying experience» since I was twelve. I have heard one rp partner say 'You make the more extreme things seem refined and not so vulgar, I admire that in a writer.'

DO YOU REMEMBER THE NIGHTS,

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show name » California Gold
barn name » GoldRush
gender » younger stallion or an older colt, depends on how you look at his age - 3 years of age.
breed » Dutch Warmblood
height » 16.2 hh
age » turned 3 about 3 months ago
color » Golden palomino
discipline » jumper
personality » despite being a young stallion, he's gentle, much like his owner. They often are told they are 'Mirror-opposites' basically meaning they mirror each other's feelings even though they are nothing alike.
owned by » Axel Van Deriz
images » a couple of images if you please, no more than five please.

WE DROVE AROUND CRAZY IN LOVE?

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[THE JESSTER!?]

Hey there, just a couple things before I can accept your application.

1. You forgot to fill out the member group section. Since he rides I'm going to say that should probably be "rider."

2. Violet eyes only occur in people with albinism. I am asuming he is not albino, so his eye color will have to be changed to a natural color (blue, brown, green, hazel, etc.)

3. The first part of the history is history, but the second part actually belongs more in the personality section. The actual history needs some beefing up. How did he come to be in the US? How did he get into riding? When did he start riding? How did he get this horse? What was his childhood like? Did he like his family? Did they support his goals to become a famous show jumper? Just tell us about his life, he's had 23 years to build a backstory. This needs to be at least 50 words if not more.

4. While morgans can jump, they are not bred or built for it and are not likely to be capable of jumping at the height which people aiming to become famous would be jumping at. For this reason it is not likely that a morgan would be crossed with a dutch warmblood for the purpose of show jumping. Also, morgans only get to be about 15.2 hands, so if the larger horse were crossed with the smaller horse, it would likely not be as tall as the ideal dutch warmblood. With the morgan crossing into it, that would also likely decrease it's jumping ability. If he really wants to become famous he would likely have to do it with a different horse, so just keep that in mind.

5. Please change your display name to your character's first middle and last name.

Just fix those things up and let me know when you have and I'll check it over again.

[THE JESSTER!?]

ACCEPTED
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